by Djmac1031
To me, this is perhaps the best series I've read here on Literotica. You are obviously a skilled writer who is also blessed with a wonderful imagination. As I mentioned in an earlier comment, it's a joy to read a story that contains good character development and a plot line that draws you on with anticipation, rather than a 'slam bam' porn tale.
In the stories I've written here I fear that I have sometimes succumbed to the pressure from comments insisting that the writer 'get to the good parts' and 'there's not enough sex'.
Please continue to share your literately skills with us at the pace that you want. Some of us really do enjoy a good story.
Love it so far!! You should keep it strictly CFNM. Maybe let her touch him, but still don't let him touch her, while still letting them be friendly to eachother.
Quite simple Don't stop. Great story, can't wait for the next installment.
I want to know what she's thinking to. The pacing of this story is perfect, you did a good job of editing this sordid tale. Sometimes I want quick, and sometimes I would like a story.
Thanks
Wow, I did not expect the facial in the kitchen! That was very arousing!
Can't wait to see where this goes.
And I do enjoy the tantalizing pace you've set. Drawing me right along to find out what Jenna is thinking ;->
I'm SO loving this series. I want to keep going now but I have to do some jobs - and my cock probably won't stand much more rubbing....LOL
I am building up a beautiful picture of Jenna in my mind and she is just perfection!
And the sexual tension is wonderful.
Great series.
Thank so much!
Cheers
Ben
Slowly catching up, hun. Seems my week for being aroused by stories that are #notmykink - beautifully told as always. 😊 Em
Yarn is spot on. Pt3 going in an unexpected age excellent direction in the kitchen there, which got my full attention!