by Ronin646
I love a good sex scene as much as the next guy but how about a little more story plot line
Soo now sam is turning into a side character and the story is turning into a lesbian story instead. Not into that stuff.
Awesome Chapter
Can't wait to see what changes the new mark will bring.
looking forward to see what will happen with Vivian.
and when Heather returns on Monday.
Thanks for your time and effort!!!
5 Stars
Wow, this is getting intriguing, seems Tessa and her attitude toward Sam could be a major kink, and I don't mean sexually, in the hole dynamic/harem relationship severely weakening it. Doesn't see how the bond works between all involved and not just her love/lust she has for Sasha. Pretty bad that Tessa is trying undermine Sams relationship with Sasha and to try make Sasha choose between Sam and herself, knowing that Sasha if Sams No# One and that Sam is the Alpha.Seems Sam needs to re-establish his position or all will crumble around him. Very interested in the new bond that has developed between Sam and Sasha, very exciting. Thank you for sharing! 5 Stars if I could vote.
Also not into the whole lesbian mess as a primary in his tale. Also find that the constant repetitive sex scenes are so predominant that the whole progression of the metanarrative has almost ceased. Instead this tale has became me an extended exercise in navel gazing with a great deal of rumination with little digestion. No real pacing anymore…
4 stars