All Comments on 'The Journey from Innocence Ch. 02'

Awesome

I'm absolutely loving this story and looking forward to the next chapter. You really capture Becky's bravery and vulnerability. I was a little worried about their bowling partners becoming threatening, but you deftly avoided that danger.

It's been a little while since you wrote this episode. I'm curious what Ben will select for her attire. I foresee some public exposure. Please continue soon.

Please continue the story. I want to see more adventures of Becky and Ben.