All Comments on 'The Journey Of Alanna'

I like it .

Cute ... quick ... literally a bit of sparkle... now to go home!

Intriguing start. I'll bookmark it and check back later

The tags look promising. To bad it was so short

4* for now. Will be 5* if the rest of the story is as good as i hope.

Good start, an interesting concept. Lets see where it goes.

Apologies about the many tags! I wanted to put all the planned stuff as a tag in chapter 1.

I'm a sucker for video game satire, and a cold open on a fantasy orphanage puts the PC's typical eRPG escapades in a terrifying new context.

Although I know what rabbitfolk generally look like I don’t know what half-rabbitfolk look like. Does Alanna have fur anywhere other than her ears and tail? Does her face have whiskers? Does her face look more like an human face or an rabbitfolk face: teeth, eyes, cheeks, etc.? How about her legs, arms, and feet?

I’m just trying to get a better sense of what she looks like. Thanks!

@Anonymous

Think Nekomimi look (so ears + tail), though I usually throw in one extra feature. For Alanna, she has buckteeth like a rabbit.

Thanks! That really helps!