All Comments on 'The Keys Ch. 06'

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BobbieKayeCutieBobbieKayeCutiealmost 3 years ago

I'm loving this story! I can totally identify with Lydia's desire to go outside naked, while fearing getting caught. She's come up with an elaborate adventure, and has to force herself along each part of it.

Eager for the next part!

secretwatchersecretwatcheralmost 3 years ago

Need to get rid of that backup dress. Gives her options she should not have. Perhaps somebody can steal the backpack or she leaves it in a place that becomes unaproachable?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

It's just perfect. I love how she planned the whole thing and not everything goes right. I love the realism, even the backup. Keep up the good work!

DevilbobyDevilbobyalmost 3 years ago

I'm not gonna say anymore until I have read the lot. 5 🌟.

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