by OutdoorCat
Please post Part 9 as soon as possible. I've done "retrieve the keys" dares as well but nothing so I we the top risky. Each story nails the emotions one feels trying to retrieve the next key.
I check this site every morning looking for the next installment and can't wait to see how this tale unfolds.
THE PLOT THICKENS
My gosh when you think she'll get out of it scott free, the universe just comes along and makes things far more complex for our 'poor' naked heroine here.
This is so very exciting!
Clever way to get her to lose her safety net without losing her 'challenge' completely. Well done.
A perfectly calibrated chapter, with just the right mix of excitement and peril… and exactly the right ending, upping the stakes still further at exactly the right time. I’ve looked forward to every new installment and will anticipate the next one even more than usual.
You are a great author. I wonder if you planned this chapter from the beginning. Amazing story, I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter!