All Comments on 'The Kingdom Ch. 14'

WOW!!! What an explosive chapter!!! Nothing in this story has panned out the way I thought it would.The twists and turns really set this story apart. Well done! Please don’t wait too long to wrap up this cliffhanger! 5 stars!

Unfair. I'm completely hooked! I stumbled upon this story around 1 am...and now it's after 4 and I have work in the morning!

Thank you for the enthralling tale!

Thanks for the feedback! Sorry for the sleep deprivation ;)

Great chapter with the twists and turns. Have you thought about accepting donations via Patreon or PayPal? Would love to see you continue with regular updates to this story.

I would really like to see an extended section of the story set in the kennel. Just a thought. Thanks for a truly fantastic story!

Just amazing writing, nothing more to say. I really hope you will continue this fantastic tale!

Brilliant chapter, so the plot thickens!

Btw, I wanted to apologise for my reaction to your last chapter, non consent is a massive trigger for me for what is probably obvious reasons. It was actually through exploring BDSM with my husband that allowed a lot of healing to take place. I’ve since noticed that your tags for the story did include non consent but I’ve really been enjoying this story so at the I read it I took the category at face value. I really am loving your story, I’ll just make sure I check the tags specific to each chapter. I was probably having a bad day.

I’m really looking forward to seeing how the story progresses! I’m no expert but I’d say you definitely have marketable skills. It’s a very engaging story.

Tess (UK)

Hello! Love your writing. When can we expect the next chapter? I would love to see more of the kennel.

Easily my favorite author on the site. The back and forth of your stories is wonderful. I genuinely hope you keep producing more, you’re phenomenally talented.

I hope you continue this story, it’s so good!

Keep writing! I need to know how it ends!!

Please keep writing! Such an amazing story.

There has to be more! I’m way too invested in this series! There has to be more!

All I Want for Christmas is to get the next chapter of this series!! Please!!

Please, please, please continue this story. I need to know how it ends!

I discovered your story just last night through a recommendation from another writer in another comment section, and I have to tell you that it's exceptionally well-written. Sure, it cost me quite a lot of sleep last night, I found it around midnight and had no intention finishing it but just couldn't put it down. In a way I'm glad ... this chapter in particular packed a real emotional punch, and it goes without saying I hope (in light of everything) that you're doing well and everything is as okay as possible. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Well that was a Chapter and a half! A lot of tension and emotion in there and I'm very glad that you are continuing with the story even after its been going on for so long. I sincerely wish you continue this story as I am quite invested in the story and Ali/Jodie's journey.