All Comments on 'The Knight and the Assassin Ch. 01'

Well told and definitely erotic. Mind you the prospect of chainmail next to pubic hair just brought a chuckling “Hell No” reaction.

It’s not exactly important for a fantasy story but unless that mail was very fine lightweight (+ well made) chainmail it would need cloth or leather backing. That comment is almost from an empirical perspective, but comes from wearing chain mail on the head. If you want to keep your hair you do need a protective barrier.

Looking forward to reading more. Tess (UK)

The chain mail would only prove a problem if there was hair to catch in it.

A good start to what may prove to be an amusing love story.

That was an amazing first chapter! You’ve got me hooked. I am so excited to read this fun little tale :) thank you