All Comments on 'The Last Flowers Ch. 14'

Not a bad chapter, and I'm already enjoying Tansy as a character, but the beginning feels like it could have used a little more polish.

For example, jumping from "Oh, trust me, you'll like what they have planned." to this with a chapter break feels a bit jarring and confusing if not reading chapter 14 immediately after chapter 13.

Overall, the first page of the chapter just makes me want to quote Ron Burgundy's "that escalated quickly". To some extent, that simplistic, hurried presentation was inevitable, given the mindstate of the townspeople, but I think there was still room for improvement.