All Comments on 'The Last One Left Pt. 02'

Looking forward to pt 3

Read the first part. Started reading this one. It went downhill really fast. Not going to read anymore of this. There are better stories out there.

Loved the first chapter. Not liking where the second one left off. It’s your story so take it wherever you want but if you’re into bondage, pain, etc. warn your readers that’s what’s coming. You can’t hide the true nature of the story by putting it into the Sci-Fi genre and not warning readers with a heads up intro.