All Comments on 'The Last One Left Pt. 03'

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tazmuntazmun2 months ago

This chapter sucks. I just want Asha to have a permanent dirt nap.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Looking forward for the next one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Loving this story so far. Are there any plants to continue it?

AnonymousAnonymous27 days ago

First chapter, bends them to his will which was a great start. I was hoping it would continue where he eventually breaks them down or wins them over. Now it's some BDSM femdom emasculation which totally ruins it for me. Breaking Delta down just made it worse (she was adorable and I hoped for better for her and the kid, now she feels tainted but I'm sure the kid will be just fine with it)

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