All Comments on 'The Last Shapeshifter Ch. 04'

I was so sure Sabrina was one of THE OTHERS, and I'm really pleased she's not, at this point at least.

Your comment makes me wonder, what happens if the others touch Trevor. Because right now he's like a goddamn sex doll to his friends.

This chapter was a great read! Much naughtier than your previous ones, which I can't complain. Looking forward to your next one!

Interesting concept, might fit better under mind control but it's fine. Of his two friends I get the distinct feeling Sabrina is abusing the situation. Max at least seems to put up a little resistance. I don't know if that's intentional or just my inference, but foreboding none the less. His mother's warnings are apt though, even the people he trusted most can't actually be trusted.

I hope to see this story to the very end I've waited years to read a story with just what I want in it keep up the great work I'll check out your other stories as I eagerly wait for more chapters!

Very great job as always! Looking forward to the rest!

I thought blue pill was written in a way I enjoy, but this is like that, but written in a way I enjoy more. For reading sake, story telling, intrigue and mystery, I find this like, 30% more interesting. I'm not to sure how far reaching literotica is, but if you want more people to possibly read this, Try Webnovel. Com the site is pretty easy to use for both reading and writing, it also has a simple to use app.

I guess it’s been a month now that i check everyday to see if the sequel has been released

Next part when

Sorry for the delay. After 5 weeks off my job started up again and my writing pace took a hit. The next chapter is 80% complete and is longer than the previous chapters. I hope to have it submitted next week.

A hero for giving us an update! I specifically check every few days to see if you updated it. Good stuff! What's the range of chapter lengths are you feeling for this one? Also good stuff once again you just might be my favorite author on this site. You're sub genres itch a scratch that others don't really do

Amazing!

I love your imagination, characters and just the whole goddam story!

Thank you for sharing, and I'm the edge of my seat wondering what will happen next:D

Please keep these coming, I check every day for the next chapter!

Quality story right here, need next chapter soon though!!

As much as I would like a shape-shifting power, I don't enjoy reading then in stories because they are too ideal. Unless there's some kind of chaotic twist. Yours is the best I've read. Potential to become more random desires like a dominatrix, neko, amazon, Chris Hemsworth celebrity type, jock, navy pilot. Funny if he finds Sabrina has a desire for the bully.

Edit: Oops.. Skipped over page 2. Forgot bully was called Lance.

Did the author get Corona

Love the story so far good work