by proseinagarden
True to the characters yet entirely new like we’re first meeting them — you succeeded beyond expectation. A simmering, seductive, intensely erotic piece from that first brief kiss “…careful and deliberate.” to the outrageously erotic sex scene(s) from couch to bed that morphed beautifully into love making. Damn, you’ve created two unforgettable characters. Must say that the scene you created around the prohibition bartending lesson was beyond seductive/tumescent — the “…simultaneously wild and sweet” kiss and how Moriah caressed Suzie’s neck simply orgasmic. Guess I’m a fan of your writing.
"It tasted like naked caresses -- bright and full of emotion."
Prose, I don't know how you manage to get better and better, but you do! Your writing is simply an excruciating pleasure. I love seeing these two lovers from different perspectives.
Thank you for your continued support! I love seeing your comments! <3