All Comments on 'The Lauranna Vignettes Pt. 05'

I love these short stories

Although there are few words you capture the heat and passion of the encounters between you two and bring it to life.

But I think I agree with her

I totally agree with the woman in the last paragraph!

Once again you have created an intensely concentrated quickie that packs an enormous erotic punch.

And again, this one ends with an imagination-teasing twist. How long had she been watching? Did she masturbate and cum while watching? Did she join you...? The story reverberates deliciously beyond the point at which it ends!

Love and hugs

Marixxxxx

...enjoyed it, five-starred it then forgot to leave a comment. Mea culpa and catching up now, Anna. As said, read it and enjoyed it. Your readership cries out for more.

Oh to be the woman in the final paragraph! But you give us such a wonderfully vivid word picture that it is as though I was there xx

So erotic, so nice and loving!

And the looks on Anna and Laura's faces in my mind when they heard the compliment is priceless!

Thank you!