All Comments on 'The Law of Attraction Ch. 06'

You have brought out a side to this love story that really needed to be told. The fact that you wrote this story telling both sides is fantastic. I am patiently waiting (OH HELL NO I'M NOT...LOL!!!) for the next installment to this story.

I think you will love the final chapters

I loved the story of Ashley and Jamie. It is different in the way that you gave each their own version of their relationship together. It must be harder to keep things straight, organized and to not make errors.

The first two Jamie names in this part of the story should have been Jackie. See below.

Well this was all really turning me on and I became obsessed with eating out Jamie's pussy again, when Jamie suddenly announced that she wanted to see Jamie suck off Jeff's cock.

It should say Ashley instead of Annabel in the last part of the text of the story. See below.

......This brings us to the end of the 6th chapter of the story, in the next chapter Annabel sets about the plan that will result in her being fucked by Jamie

I think the way you have written this is beautifully erotic and have enjoyed each chapter even though we know what happens in the next two chapters well done