All Comments on 'The Law of Jungle Ch. 05'

Nice updt Mr. Writer. But instead of similar events going simuraneouly side by side , like 2 bros fucking each of the daughters , u cud tackle things differently. Had 1 been banged by the father or some other tribal member it wud hv bn lot better....

Another thing , The Tribal lust fr these ladies. Its missing in some sense. The women seems 2 b slutily longing fr sex , it sud hv bn the other way round... A chapter where old ugly tribes/or even younger ones enjoying these otherwise untouchable/unthinkable ladies wud be hell of an erotic updt. Ladies wud be made fed some potion unknowingly, & then they wid relish the true animalistic lust frm old natives , in their semi conscious state. No passion / delicate luv affairs , just ripped apart in lust , as is supposed 2 b

& pls , instead of inhouse adultery / wife swapping amongst friends , let the tribes do the job. The hubbys/fathers/... unaware of how their sophisticated sisters/moms/daughters/ daughter in laws/xxx being ravished in this jungle kingdom ...

Have long bn ur admirer. Regularly chck fr updts ... keep satisfying us with ur magic

* hv rated u 5 stars , but it cud hv bn more erotically/realistically handled

Ler old tribal people , cheif /fathers/ etc fuck these whites

Have given u 5 stars but the can be much more erotic & realistically dealt with

Very good writer but Please make this sequence of story more dirty/erotic/horny/full of feelings/full sexi etc.. like previous stories of night of error & donor uncle in appartment. You are amazing writer.. plz keep my request in mind. Thanks

Sure,Mr.Singh,I always try to make my new episode more erotic than earlier. Thanks for your encouragement.

A great author

literary as erotic at the highest level

I would like to agree with a commentator, SING JATT please more feelings,more erotic dirty talk, dirty , horny like donor uncle, looking at the sex parts in the mirror when they are united, this commented by the lovers etc..

Definitely, I will take care Mr.Anonymous. Thanks for your suggestion.

Thanks @ kanyakumari007. I m waiting for your next erotic episode. Take care.

This is a completely absorbing well-told drama, full of atmosphere, with a great setting and excellent character development. The love scenes are well written, and are interwoven with the plot in a superb way, but their brevity is most unfortunate.

U hv good story developement & elaboration abilities ,but overall simply immaturish. 0 sense of a realistic approach.Such easily u bring out the depravities in otherwise cultural siciety ladies , & in an over the top sequence of similar events.Sorry...

u people publish we read, we commnt , & if u mind ,we fu*kin dont care