All Comments on 'The Legend'

I previously read "The Mail Order Bride" this writer wrote and found it quite good.. this story I found has a stilted.. almost as if the author was bored with writing feel about it. She wrote the same phrases over and over and I lost count over how many times I read this phrase "thrashed, screamed, climaxed" ... darling girl... your storyline was a good one... but why was the 'monster?' there? Why did the town how to supply him with a woman? Why did the woman give herself up so easily? Sex in a storyline is a wonderful thing but so are the characters... this note is not to thrash you but to hopefully help... i mean no disrespect on your writing as I do enjoy reading your works. Keep up the good work but use your thesaurus.... Jane

I enjoyed this story---I'd love to be the monster--'G'

Well, I liked this one too. It isn't so much a story as a moment in time, frozen. I didn't care who the characters were or what they did before.

What an exciting story. I was extremely excited....read that as long and hard, as I read it. My wife especially enjoyed the after-effect of my reading this very exciting story.

You keep up the great work and I'll just keep it up as I read and play. Thanks for a great time!

I don't know how you lasted thru it, but it was good and hot.

forget the writer getting bored with writing the damn thing i liked some to the other work but this was crap shit for those over 18 it was way too long good start but the only twist was when she was done doggy style i dont often write bad reviews but on this one i must it sucked bottem line the first part was ok but then the same thing over and over and over and over see you get tired of it too jakk

I really loved this story. I wanted to be that girl... being taken and orgasming forever...

How many stories do we need to read bout "Being tied"..

This one just repeated itself over and over and over and over...

Get a new story line!

What was with the numbers? They just suddenly cut off the paragraph or story and went into numbers. 1-10. That really pissed me off, more so it threw me off and turned me off. I couldn't concentrate on the story, so it's a failure. Sorry.