by johngus22
This was fantastic. I am delighted that poor Timmy is now being dominated by three separate coaches, and can't wait to see what develops as his big-balled employer loses all respect for his floundering new hire. I loved all the vivid details, the physical and emotional descriptions. Forcing him to keep his eyes on his defeat sent me over the edge. I hope there's more to come.
I feel my brain is fried. Does he follow the right path so far? Fantasy should never influence the real life. I really wish the author may show some mercy.