All Comments on 'The Librarian's Wish'

Congratulations. You have written the worst piece of trash I've ever read.

I'd say this is female fap fodder, and not a story-story. Is this "the worst piece of trash ever written"? I think the other comment is from a site newbie if that's the case! I understand where you come from (take that either way), and trust me, until the whole library was getting down, it wasn't that bad. Certainly no worse than: "My friend's hot mom, and two other MILFs that I know from baseball practice... and then the whole team joined in."

Don't be discouraged by negative comments. Let's hear more from you . . . perhaps with a bit more character development and a slower build up to the climax. Best wishes.

Not very well developed. Take your time and develop the characters.

I think it was written by a very horny person, who needs a good fucking, it made my dick hard

I enjoyed this!

Keep up the good work!

I enjoyed this!

Keep up the good work!