All Comments on 'The Librarian's Wish'

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walkingeaglewalkingeaglealmost 15 years ago
I enjoyed this

I enjoyed this!

Keep up the good work!

walkingeaglewalkingeaglealmost 15 years ago
I enjoyed this

I enjoyed this!

Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Very Arousing

I think it was written by a very horny person, who needs a good fucking, it made my dick hard

websters_matewebsters_matealmost 15 years ago
Not very good

Not very well developed. Take your time and develop the characters.

RossDanielsRossDanielsalmost 15 years ago
Keep writing

Don't be discouraged by negative comments. Let's hear more from you . . . perhaps with a bit more character development and a slower build up to the climax. Best wishes.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
a vibrator fantasy as a story

I'd say this is female fap fodder, and not a story-story. Is this "the worst piece of trash ever written"? I think the other comment is from a site newbie if that's the case! I understand where you come from (take that either way), and trust me, until the whole library was getting down, it wasn't that bad. Certainly no worse than: "My friend's hot mom, and two other MILFs that I know from baseball practice... and then the whole team joined in."

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
congrats!

Congratulations. You have written the worst piece of trash I've ever read.

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