All Comments on 'The Light Between the Trees Ch. 08'

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GortmundyGortmundy11 months ago

A strange and interesting story.

joy_of_cookingjoy_of_cooking11 months ago

I like that he went silent when she a contacted him. There's a theme in your stories of the sub being more extreme than the dom and I hope this will be one of those. I don't want her to die. Unfortunately you also have a theme of the dom making themselves what their subs want. I hope this won't be one of those, because it seems like what she wants is a murderer.

zingfishzingfish11 months ago

Can’t wait for more!

waynejeffrieswaynejeffries10 months ago

Love the rabbit hole references and the ideas of maybe most in society are being fooled, a little Matrix like, but just great writing as usual by you, thank you for sharing.

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At last we begin, and from the smallest of things: a mistake. Cassie asked for the free will to make her own choice at the end of Wonderland, but she did something unexpected. Instead of keeping free will for herself, she gave it to her nemesis, Lily. Now Lily is free to wand...