by mastercap
When will you finish the story? You have had years to finish it. Also you called her Paul a number of times instead of Paula. And how come Will's friends were not there to meet him or tell him about the club to prepare him for what might happen?
Hope you'll continue the story. Will's on the most incredible sex journey I think any man can take. It's easy to fall for a tall slim attractive blond. A lot of white guys have a real hard time finding black women attractive. Most men don't find other men attractive, even when they have bisexual desires. But to be confronted by a beautiful well-built women, with a cock? Oh wow, what an opportunity.
You got us going Mastercap....please finish the journey.
You need to check your story for errors and edit it before you submit it. You wrote the following. "When Paula was 15, she realized she was a man in a woman's body and could no longer pretend." I do believe you mean she was a woman in a man's body. Big difference for a TS. Plus you keep calling her Paul instead of Paula.
Do you ever plan on getting back to finish the story?
Please continue your sexy and exciting story .. so very well written I couldn't stop reading.