All Comments on 'The Limits of Imagination Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Phew!

Incredible! So damned good. Hell at one point I thought one of them was going to turn around and ask me if I was ok or did I want to join in!

You perfectly captured their playful attitude at the start of the chapter and every sentence after that just built up the intensity of sensation, tension and passion. I read a lot, I’m no publisher but surely this story will sell?!

Thank you for sharing.

Tess (UK)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Good preise continues.

But sex continues to be too matter-of-fact, and still pretty vanilla except for tonguing her asshole.

From my perspective, it needs more dialog, with discussions about what he wants, what he's going to do, what she wants, how she wants it: faster, slower, harder, softer, etc.

And so far, at least, she hasn't done much except enjoy what he's doing to her.

Four stars.

Anonymous
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