All Comments on 'The Liquids Rule Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Hulk

The Incredible Hulk bit cracked me up!

DionysianDaughterDionysianDaughteralmost 9 years agoAuthor
Typo

Please forgive the typo. A revised copy has been submitted.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Should have been in Humor/satire

I'm still laughing at how bad this was.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
LOVED IT!!!...

David Banner Bruce's cousin? ; )))

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
More please!

I liked it! Almost gave it a 5 star rating but it's frustratingly short. More! Please!!!

DionysianDaughterDionysianDaughteralmost 9 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

To the anonymous comment poster, thank you for pointing out that the Hulk is the alter ego of Bruce Banner and not David Banner. I have corrected it. The new version will be up shortly. Never in my wildest dreams did I think I would ever be writing a story with an Incredible Hulk reference. Glad you enjoyed it.

palewriterpalewriteralmost 9 years ago
Actually David Banner was the name of the Bill Bixby character...

on the Hulk television program. So you weren't all wrong.

Excelsior!

DionysianDaughterDionysianDaughterover 8 years agoAuthor
The Bill Bixby TV Show

Palewriter, that's probably where I got the David from. I used to love that show! I still went ahead and made the change to Bruce though, to stay true to the comic book character.

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