All Comments on 'The Little Wulf Pt. 01'

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SlofredSlofredalmost 2 years ago

This is an amazing start. I am looking forward to the next installment. 5 Stars for an exciting opening and a whole new group of Were creatures. I am not sure the Deer are not in on it as well. They seemed just a bit too aware of what was going on around them sometime.

LiterKnightLiterKnightalmost 2 years ago

An interesting start to a series, but I recommend getting an editor; there are quite a few places where I wasn't really sure what the sentence was supposed to say until I reread it several times and guessed. I do really like the story, even coming in not having read any of your other writings, which (I'm guessing) provide more backstory on the setting and characters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This was great. I love violence. But pre marital sex? Disgusting. I joke. More please. This is quite the intriguing biography little Leigh.

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