All Comments on 'The Live-In'

Exceptionally well thought out, written, and presented. Keep going.

Thinking about the entire thing as a possibility my honest answer is of course,

“Yeah, why not?”

So many problems revolve around sex and relationships, this concept is sexual freedom at its best. Love the story it’s very cleverly done.

Tess (UK)

Really liked it.

5/5

Definitely a lot of world left to really explore, plenty is hinted at or referenced (ie the breeder program) that can be explored further in later additions to the setting (should you decide to write more). I wasn't sure I'd enjoy it at first, but it's pretty good

Sorry, you screwed the pooch right there. Have fun, the ball is now dropped in the dirt.

Not a good thing. Having a third in a relationship always screws everything up. Been there, been divorced twice, I eventually learned.

Nice pace and exploration of an alternative future,

Would be cool if you could write more. The fantasy of a loving relationship with one woman, with a "live-in" on the side is something i find really interesting.

I would love to read a follow up!

This was one of the few good free use stories on this site. Well done.

Amazing. Simply amazing.

Definitely one of the best free use stories out there. Love to read another...