by thenewerguy
Loving this story, and really looking forward to see how it develops.
Keep safe
Many thanks
Al
Starting this I do feel like I have come into the middle of a good performance. What I saw drew me in and made me read to the end. But now I have to go back and see how this started. Well done, I will await the next installment with fine anticipation.
so far so good. Hope you drop the foot thing. That really ruined the middle of this story, but the 1st 2 were awesome.
Thanks @jmkuehn. We will be letting the foot stuff take a back seat in coming chapters as it's not everyones thing. We are taking a few days away from this story to work out where it needs to go. But any suggestions are welcomed and appreciated
Nothing wrong with a little foot worship she should be willing to worship her sister entirely. Looking forward to see how the husband works into the story.
I respectfully disagree with the comment expressing dislike of the foot worship aspects of this part of the story. I hope that this is not sidelined moving forward, as I see it as a very sexy expression of the roles depicted in the story. I look forward to more in the future.
@Bluetortoise27 Thanks for your comment. I think that some of the foot worship aspects probably will be reduced a little in coming chapters, but not removed entirely. At the moment we are trying to work out where this story can go from here, and are taking any suggestions from anyone with ideas (we had a rough outline for chapters 6-8, but that doesn't seem like it'll work now).
In the meantime, if you like foot fetish stories, please take a look at our other short series "Train Encounter" which we are also hoping to extend soon (work permitting).
Fantastic scene at the end. Each element merging into the next. You show so well the depths service can take one to.
Written from the perspective of one who truly understands the layer upon layer in a strong Domme/submissive relationship.