All Comments on 'The Long Road To Ruin Ch. 51'

by Lady_Blackhawk

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Truly a long road

to ruin, and adventurous too ! I do hope the ruin will eventually be Benthur's ...

Thanks for an entertaining fantasy !

alyssacouslandalyssacouslandabout 12 years ago

I really enjoyed this chapter! That fight with Cata had me on the edge of my seat! As usual the way you describe the fight was awesome! I could see it very clearly in my mind's eye.

Great job! I'm sad to know the tale will soon be over, but I also want to finally read how they dispose of that bastard Benthur! :D

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Excellent

Very relieved to see the "To Be Continued", I was hoping this great story would include the 2nd module :)

Shiloh is at her best when she is sleeping around though, I hope the 'true love' won't interfere with her sexcapades? Speaking of casual encounters, I always thought it was a shame the night with Gemli in Westwood was skipped over, perhaps you could rectify that?

Looking forward to more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
how could you!

I'm heartbroken that vico and shiloh don't fix things relationship wise. I'm really sad you're taking the route of simon :( vico is amazing and has so many facets to his character that would have been more interesting to explore. Simon is too new of a character for me to feel anything for.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
hello this is September,PLEASE give me the rest of the story

I have read all this week, i would really love to see how you finish everything. Please more story

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
An awesome Story

I have to say I enjoy playing NWN myself and ran my own world for a few years, I loved the story so much I took the past few days to read it and can not wait for more. I love to write as well and this was simply amazing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

pia should die

And I want Vico to be with Shiloh!! They belong together!

jameseduncanlvnjameseduncanlvnalmost 8 years ago
"(To be continued)"

I do hope you will return to his saga. I greatly enjoyed it

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

It's been years, but what I wouldn't give to get the last couple of chapters.

I hope this comment finds you well!

Please come baaaaack!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
i NEED to know the ending

i know you haven't posted in years but i truly desire a ending to this series. i spent a week of my life reading every entry with frequent breaks for masturbation lol just to find out there is no ending! i was CRUSHED

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
delightful

this was a wonderful read! I have a huge soft spot for Simon so I'm glad that he and Shiloh got engaged. she's a very fun protagonist, and I've enjoyed how you wrote this story. I hope you're well <3

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
fabulous storytelling

I have found myself still reading this brilliant well written story until 2am in the morning. Lady_BlakHawk, like your other stories, you create/use characters who are captivating. You have made it so one feels like you know them. Want to be with them. I have loved this one. Thank you for such wonderful writing. One hopes I and I think many others will also feel as I do.

Regards

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