All Comments on 'The Lost Lord Ch. 11'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Loving it

I'm addicted to your story. Please keep the chapters coming!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Great Story!

Keep it goin! Thanks so much!

goatman92goatman92about 11 years ago
How is hand-to-hand combat with a kraken even casual?

Love the story though you could add a bit more length to the story, also this chapter seemed a bit rushed.

superfeluously_esuperfeluously_ealmost 9 years ago
Outstanding!

World building is fantastic, dialogue is good, imagery is better. Thanks for posting!!!

Aussie1951Aussie195113 days ago

This story has one huge flaw.. The lord of lust will be the lord of fucking nothing if he doesn’t get his act together. He should have his nose in his little magic book learning all those spells and actually learn how to physically hone his fighting abilities. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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