All Comments on 'The Lost Lord Ch. 12'

For a second I thought Tozomat died; freaked me out. Glad he's alive. I really like this chapter; I hope that the ones to come are just as good.

Yea, it seemed that tozomat was a bit weak to be taken out with a simple decapitation, but I liked how it turned out. Looking forward to the rest of the series

Demon version of the assassin's creed: "Nothing is taboo,and Everything is permitted"

Who was talking at the end here? I gathered it was someone named Iris and one other unidentified individual, but what is their role? Were they simply some random people that we overheard or do they actually have a place in the future narrative?

Another thing to work on, along with stuff that I mentioned previously. Still reading, still going to comment as needed. Good story still.

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