All Comments on 'The Lost Ship'

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SlofredSlofredalmost 3 years ago

An interesting way to add new characters , and hopefully new skills to the adventures of Capt Bodge and his crew. The other point of view is going to be quite interesting as well /

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

The writing for this one is.... *very* clunky and awkward. I'm not sure if you were trying a different style, but it didn't work.

goo_neiggoo_neigover 2 years ago

It is a different writing style. Less flowing than the main Tim Bodge story.

It is good to experience a different style.

Thank you writing and posting it

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Interesting side story to the main plotline, but could really use some preliminary information on how the characters got into this situation in the first place.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Ok, interesting start.

But it needs considerable story-line. Without the story-line it is nothing but a few paragraphs.

But like I said it is a good start.

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