All Comments on 'The Lovers of New Meeting'

Damn! There is no New Meeting in Connecticut. I was so hoping to find a woman (women?) from that town. (Or maybe a few town residents) A very open-minded and satisfying love story that brought Stephen and Ann back together. Well done - Five stars.

Oh my god. What a beautiful story. I do love tales that begin with the sex already in full bloom from the very first sentence. As writers, we all create our own “Brave Nude Worlds” in which our deepest fantasies and our secret desires come true. Isn’t wonderful? I hope to read more delightful stories in this nakedly lovely Connecticut setting.

Your writing as usual is beyond par. Beyond five stars if there was such a thing.

New Meeting gives new meaning to the word "New." You make George Eliot kinkier than I had ever thought. On the other hand, everyone and anyone having exhibitionist sex somehow makes it seem less kinky, less transgressive, and therefore less sexy. Nevertheless, bottom line (no pun intended -- well, maybe slightly intended; inspired by your story, you might say), it will always be sexy to me. Well written as always. Love the happy ending -- when two people are meant to be together, sometimes it will just all magically work out. Upshot: Mark gives permission, and Exodus forbids it. No wonder we are all so confused all the time! Thanks for letting true love work out this time. 5* ~~JB

I loved this tale, a great deal!

What a great story!

Great story!! Love your writing, as always!!! Maybe I should adopt Clarice for one of my stories, where a football team all use her!!!!

This is a tidy, stand alone story with an uncommonly happy ending, and so well presented. The prose reads smoothly, the dialogue is never stilted, and there is nary an editing error to be found. Is there a more public way for a wife to reconcile with her husband? Obviously, some deeper meaning is attached but I can't quite suss it out. No matter, everyone got what they deserved in the end, and happily so. Five stars for originality.

Wonderful story, Peter/Stephen. I can't think of another writer on this website who makes me laugh and smile so much. Your writing is so clever, creative and so enjoyable, but full of little bits of philosophy and esoteric references. And I love how you create such a complete scene, the little town and its history. Having lived in Connecticut, I never knew this kind of thing went on! It's been a while since your last piece, but well worth the wait. Thank you for brightening up my day. Best wishes, Andy

Definitely an unusual town at New Meeting. This was a very well written story with wonderful characters. Excellent work.

Peter Cleveland, like a master bricklayer, lays down one word after another in perfect order, creating a beautifully crafted story. Some readers complain that Literotica stories take too long to arrive at the sexy parts, not here. In the story’s first sentence, Stephen’s cock is in his young girlfriend’s butt, training her for the religious rituals to follow. Cleveland immediately slays impatient readers, but the author/protagonist

has age-related apprehension. In reality, twenty-year-olds have no problems having sex with forty-year-olds. Perhaps the protagonist feels guilty about the circumstances as he carefully insulates himself from academic sanction by qualifying his questionable activities with ex-students.

In a wild stab at creativity, Cleveland has constructed a sexual utopia that outdoes Sir Thomas More’s fictional island society. The Cleveland utopia is in Connecticut, a state with a history of unusual religious orders. In ‘New Meetings,’ every participant has their mouth open and legs spread wide to facilitate loving their neighbor. As for anal sex, it is poopless.

One minor bone of contention is the anal ordeal that the professor’s wife uses to punish him. A 4-inch tiny dildo strap-on is hardly what a vengeful wife would use. An 8-inch dildo with the circumference of a silver dollar would undoubtedly bring tears to the good professor’s eyes and make his fantasy worthwhile.

All good things come to an end, and the ‘end’ is the professor’s butt. After subjecting himself to a wifely butt-fuck, the professor reunites with his rebellious wife and nullifies their separation. Having momentarily given up lesbianism, the spouse’s wife retreats to being a homemaker after publicly humiliating (raping) her husband.

In conclusion, Cleveland has created an outstanding fiction with sexual suspense. Any Voyers will utilize the Kleenex box more than once. One must compliment Cleveland on his creativity and be amused by the author’s fantasized rape. The lengthy story’s complexity requires careful reading, and the attention is rewarded.

Well, a happy end this time, but I am afraid you still wont sell the film rights to Hollywood..

I very much liked how the story unfolded and was laughing out loud repeatedly. Besides that, your story raises questions on intimacy and fidelity without preaching - quite remarable for a setting around a "new meeting".

PS: I tried to find out where the "Be careful what you wish" quote came from. One site claimed its from "King Midas", a fable by Aesop- just Aesop did not write on Midas, afaik...