All Comments on 'The Lowborn's Rise Ch. 01'

Your writing sucks. Get an editor and stop writing until you have read enough to learn how to use the English language.

Previous anon comment is unnecessarily harsh. Sure, there's room for improvement, but there's potential here.

I kind of like it. Lit crit though shows an amazing lack of perception. Obviously someone who can’t write so he tries to be a critic. Such behavior deserves no less than a sloppy raspberry.

I like the vulnerability of the main character, relatable with a lot of room to grow, the coldness of the washerwoman is intriguing as well. A lot of room for more detail and explanation in the story but nice that it moves fast. Some grammar and word (possibly autocorrect) errors, so I’d give it another read and fix them accordingly, but a good start overall