All Comments on 'The Luckiest Man Alive Ch. 03-04'

This is not an Incest story. You may want it to be eventually but after 50+ pages I don't think I can wait any longer for the story to begin, You also need to put some passion into your sex scenes descriptions and adjust the tags to reflects what is ACTUALLY in the story.

OH YEEEEAAAH, so excited for this man. Gonna comment my thoughts again when I finish it, but I'm already sure it's gonna be good.

Amszing story, wil you continiu?

Ohh my God man, this ending... This was PERFECT!

I honestly think it was better than the first two chapters. I'm so curious (and kinda scared now) to see how the tale of the luckiest man alive will continue. Keep up the great work man, I really hope you continue to post consistently

Nooo! Oh shit 🤣

To anonymous, I will continue. There is no escape for you, my gentle purveyors of pornographic prose! Chapters five and six will be completed next week. And then I will edit them excessively, extensively, neurotically. I anticipate them being well over 20K words.

Kai_Damon, I am glad you enjoyed my ending. I have so much more planned for Gaius and Gaia and how their doomed twincestuous tryst may unravel their world. There is more! By Mars Mighty Meatstick, there is more!

Muskyboy, welcome back! It is most definitely incest -- but alas, long-winded and winding incest. Gaius lost his virginity to a girl who looked just like his twin. He obsesses over Gaia on virtually every page. His every plan and purpose is aimed towards winning his twin's heart. He's just an eighteen year old fool who alas is really bad at getting what he wants. Especially when the whole world is against him. Regardless, thanks for your continuing commentary. It is much appreciated!

Want part 3

WHERE'S THE NEXT PART PETRONIUS, YOU SAID YOU WOULD POST IT LAST WEEK LOL

What's going on with this story. Will it continue?

When will the next one be?

Oh good grief. Every time I've seen muskyboy's comments, it's in complaint that a story is moving too slowly.

PJ, this series is excellent, and those of us who aren't just looking for a quick jerk appreciate the pacing of the story.

(Although I wouldn't say no to speeding up the *publication* speed!)

When are you done editing the next chapter of a masterpiece?

Really sad that Petronius just disappeared out of thin air. This had really great potential, still hope he comes back one day

Please please drop the next chapters. It's a very good story despite "Gauis" being a fool

Can’t wait for more!