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waltdeewaltdeeover 1 year ago

I was really worrying that you were going to have the hypnotist steal her from the husband and cuck him. Thanks for not breaking my heart. Good short story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Didn't read any of Page 2. So many mistakes on the first. Learn to close quotations!

26thNC26thNCover 1 year ago

Silly, even if she did “brake” his dick.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great little short. A little uncomfortable to read due to many incorrect words and grammatical errors. Please think of your readers and use the tools available to help you; Word or Google Docs with Grammarly would get most of them.

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I love to write. I've taught communications as adjunct faculty and have had a pretty rich adventure filled life. Many things that have happened to me or I have done would make great stories. I'm a bit older now but women still turn their heads which always makes me smile. It's...