All Comments on 'The Magician Pt. 01'

Can’t wait for Part 2.

I love this, it could lead anywhere.

Magic!

Anna

Another cracker! Thank you. I have been following you for years and your stuff is always great. Please hurry with the next parts as we can't wait for more.

“Lose”, not “loose”. “Mesmerizing”, not “memorizing”. Otherwise a fun read.

15 years and Vanessa hasn't ever improved...

Her protagonist is always the exact same girl, just with a different name.

Her fetishistic obsession with tiny tits and protagonists who get mistaken for children just gets kinda weird as culture changes over the course of a decade and a half...

And her having gotten the term "The Chinese Virus" for COVID-19 from Donald Trump in a suspiciously deleted story is a huge red flag to me as an Asian-American.

4 starsm i think i am gonna like this series.

Excellent as always. Jodie is a good girl. May I add that, on page 1, it is mesmerize, not memorize.