All Comments on 'The Making of a Slave Ch. 04'

Keep going with this...

Wait, finish the story!

This chapter seemed rushed..but it should have slowed down when the year was up.

Please finish the story!!

Ok ok I like these 4 chapters so far, but you need to make longer chapters!

A good first try, but your story was too short and lacking in details. You could have gone so much further. Read some of the other stories to see what I mean. But at least you finished the story! I hate an unfinishede story!

Why did you submit this final part? This is nothing but a list of what happened to Kate over the past year. Sadly all you have done is to destroy the story with a weak ending. I suggest you revise the ending and re-submit.

As the wife of the author i know that for some reason He ended it this way on purpose even if it is a bad ending