All Comments on 'The Making of a Slut Wife Ch. 04'

a great new chapter ...

i can't wait for more and for more huge farts in his mouth ....maybe even in public at some point ?

The absolute madman!

I'm glad to have had the opportunity to read another entry from you Fetishcentral. Amongst the many stories on Literotica, this one has one of the most unique scenarios I've ever read. Even if the themes aren't, the execution and exploration of those themes within a unique context is novel and fun.

You have a fantastic imagination for domination and submission. Both the physical and mental aspects. For instance, the many situations where Julie is dominated are an interesting juxtaposition to what I typically associate with bodybuilders.

Clearly this isn't meant to be some deep exploration of character motivations either, so I appreciate you cutting out the middle-man and getting straight to the meat of things. There are a few editing mistakes in this entry, but nothing egregious enough to detract from my enjoyment. Hope all is well and keep up the great work.

Wow, what an imaginative take on domination and cuckoldry!

I hope that Julie will fatten up Shannon and then pimp her out as a street whore and for be entertainment for parties of old, horny men.

How will Julie find men with 9” cocks that will satisfy her?

I love the last sentence.

I love the thought of Julie growing big again.