All Comments on 'The Making of Brii Jones'

Thank you so much for posting. This made for an awesome read. Incredibly horny. Such a dream.

I really enjoyed this. Even though it was a long read, it was well written so nt a struggle to get through. Only criticism is you need to work on the proofreading. All in all it was one of the better long stories I've read. Your other story "Household Changes" is another one.

Thank you for the constructive feedback! I agree, the proofreading is not up to my standard. It's difficult with something this long and I have limited computer time to post, so I had to go with what I had.

Also note to all: I delete comments that say "not believable" ... It is a fiction site. Come on

Loved every bit! I would love to have DD's.💞

It isn't her asshole any more ... it's her pussy and her clitty. Be a good sissy boi.

This was a long read. It was addictive and a little brutal. The long read allowed me to live the fantasy.

Idiotic! If a wife wants to treat a husband like that, the only thing that threatens her is divorce. And since he is unemployed, she pays him alimony! Everything else you wrote at the start will only lead to a report and a lawsuit against your wife!