All Comments on 'The Making of Wren Ch. 01'

Fine start, a bit short, but enough to set the plot for many interesting chapters ahead.

Yes, and double yes, love the start, can hardly wait for next chapter!

We have seen many such stories go down the drain. It follows a tried and true and eventually predictable plot. But I am keeping an open mind. Please try for a minimum of two pages. And at this point, hard to see how this is bdsm, as opposed to non-con.

One star. For choosing the wrong category.

There is a f´n noncon-section for a reason.

Non-consent / Reluctance, not BDSM.

I do not agree with knocking a story because for his/her first submission they put it in bdsm instead of non-con. That seems to be a common mistake for first timers. Bdsm for literotica means quite a different thing than might otherwise be expected. I suggest reminding the writer and not scoring the story, unless the grammar/spelling etc is atrocious, which this story is not.