All Comments on 'The Man in Suite Twelve'

by Verhaalen

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lc69hunterlc69hunterabout 1 year ago

A little quicky to scratch the itch

mitchawamitchawa11 months ago

Nicely written story. A different plot beginning with a, and ending with a body covered with cum. Penetrated but not truly fucked, satisfied but not completely, wanting a name but none exists, wondering and hoping, who is that stranger. Maybe next year. The sex scene is well described with a long build-up to insertion. She and the reading audience were left wanting.

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A short story writer in various genres. Of Dutch birth but living in the UK for many years. I appreciate comments but do not respond to them, sorry.