All Comments on 'The Man in the Cloth Mask'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Why would any sane man do this?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

You should have left it in 2001. No man would do this, or should I say, no real man would do such a thing. If this rates higher than a 2 I'll be amazed. Then again, odiouser will probably love it.

bigtddybrbigtddybralmost 2 years ago

Pity that there is no sequel to this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Garbage-1*

Rocky62Rocky62almost 2 years ago

Nutz idea to carry out, she never asked for a third party

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Please continue with more chapters. There are many more scenarios and sex positions to be explored.

pepepilotpepepilotalmost 2 years ago

It is a good story but it is not complete in my opinion! 4-stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

"Nathan, her husband of two years, had been slightly startled when she had asked him to devise a sexual scenario so bold and risky that it would change the way they thought about making love. She wanted him to surprise her and break the routine into which they had fallen." -- Rocky62 called it straight up. Nothing was requested that specifically called for a third party. Nathan could devised any number of scenarios that didn't include outside participants before resorting to that solution. Shoot, he could have made the first participant a female before selecting another male to share in the fun. -- 1☆

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I get it, and I like it. Most women, myself included, crave some kink and feeling filled by a strange cock. It is is wonderfully erotic. My husband has no clue how I have satisfied these needs, and they provide the sexual outlet I need. Very good story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

where is the loving wife? This is a husband letting someone else fuck their wife to see what happens. what is next? a gangbang or selling her for profit?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I liked it and will share with my wife. Her walking group is down to her and the husband of a recently deceased walker. I’m thinking he’ll seduce her before long.

LilacQueen15LilacQueen15almost 2 years ago

It's sad. I think his marriage just ended. While effective to not let the audience know who it was just like his wife. I would like to know.

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