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Anonymousover 19 years agoLOVE THAT SPIN CYCLE
Very sexy story. Would love to hear what happens the next day when John returns.
the Troubadorover 19 years agoI'm trying to figure out
why this woman is staying with the loser husband. Never mentioned kids, so guess the only reason is his paycheck.
Hot story reasonably written. Would have liked the paragraphs shorter, but that's just me.
Lalenya Loveover 19 years agoWatch the inconsistencies...
...such as his first having green eyes, then blue. Also, Mrs. Adams becomes Mrs. Stevens, then Mrs. Adams again. Otherwise, great story -- deliciously erotic and humorous.
Cheers,
Lalenya :^)
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