All Comments on 'The Marine Bk. 02 Ch. 15'

Thank you for another great story . I hope you do find time to do another soon .

All the best and stay safe and well.

D.x

I loved this. It was great in every aspect. Please write more like this in the future.

Thank you for this stellar effort and story. Encouraging you as you can to continue your writing. Recognizing what you shared know that you need to take care of you and your circumstances and till next time best wishes!!!

Loved the final chapter. Great fun. Thank you.

You're one of the best active writers on the site right now. I really enjoyed the series and please forgive my comments over the chapters with plot suggestions. You draw me into your universe, and I can't help myself! LOL 5*

Great story. Really enjoyed your writing. Please keep writing.

Very good story. I enjoyed all the chapters. Thank you.

Knew you would finish this the same way you started it, with greatness.

No matter what you write next or how often you publish you've made sure your be one that even if it's not my cup of tea as the saying goes I'll still give it a try because of how well you put stories together. It could be a one part stand alone or a multipart series and it still gets the same effort from you to be entertaining to your readers. Thanks for Sharing!

This is a great read. I thought I’d like the first book best, but reading book 2 proved it was even better.

Absolutely one of the very best family romance stories I have ever read. thank you so much for sharing your incredible talent.

Liked the story, felt a little rushed at the ending.

The Grandparents, especially the Grandfather was important in the early chapters but totally disappeared later.

I liked this story. Keep writing please, I love to read more stories from yoi

Thank you so much for this series. It was well written and well researched... and hot as hell

I did not like Nate/Nick in the start of book 2, but you brought him around in the end. I guess the he was suffering from battle fatigue or something like that when he got the offer to join “the org” since he could be so callus to fake his death, knowing how much they all would be suffering from his “death”

But as they say, all that ends well and so on, Nate came out of that as a much better and more likeable person in the end.

I'm so glad I finished the series. I truly loved the whole thing and will be reading more from you. Thank you for the great ending

Awesome story. You are a great writer

Just LOVED the story and the way you wrote it. Personal opinion (I know, everyone has one) however, was that it would have been better with just one of Adriana's friends. Just throwing in more and more partners doesn't necessarily make the story better. In this case, it just made it get boring during those extra connections.

I really enjoyed this series.

5 stars

Thanks

Loved this story series. I have to say after reading the first series, when we went to Book 2, it didn’t sit well with me. There was no explanation of his reason to join the ORG when he had 4 women who loved him. I would have assumed his enlistment would have been up after 4 tours in Iraq and he would re-unite with his 4 women. As I read further in Book 2 I got into the story more. I honestly thought he was going to marry Julia, but Adrianna was another possibility that wasnt related. Thank you for bringing this story full circle. I love a good story with a happy ending.

Thanks for Writing!

Fantastic story!! Loved all the chapters,well written you have a real talent,thank you!!

Great story!

5 stars!

You should rename chapters 1 - 10 to Bk. 01 Ch. 1 - 10 so everything is in order.

Thanks