All Comments on 'The Massage -- A 750 Word Valentine's Day Story'

Is this supposed to be a story? Go back to school, little boy.

How will he feel when he has to find another man for her?

Truely is difficult to handle, as you will find out on her birthday, when john is her present and you can only watch him take her away from you.. then you will realize thjs was all a set up.

Ease up, it is a flash story <750 words, I mean how much character development can you get in that? Cut the author a break Anon.

I liked it. Wish wifey would do this for me. Good job. 4*

In the LW category, ignore scores except as a guide. It is generally the type of story that determines the score, not the writing or storytelling skill. Eg. BTB, cuck, etc

The wife just provided her husband with a prostitute, then they kept her for a threesome, and it was all just so surprising and wonder and, . . .well, I have the best wife ever r r r r r . . . . I suspect you're are not the only man who has had her recently, and will continue to have her, with our without your knowledge and permission.

I mean, that's what most loving wives do for their husband's birthdays, right? Fix ol' hubby up with he very own piece of strange ass? Makes you wonder what the hubby will do for this indulgent selfless wife, or at least agree to, on Her birthday?

Does anyone her a cucking sound?

The wife will want one tomorrow.

Keep your day job

There is a perfect essence of the language and context in this story. The first para is itself makes it interesting then don’t want to leave till end and also at the end I felt he could have written more ... this is not a news so don’t compare reality.

Good read

NO you have a wife that's cheating. She is trying to make you a cheat too so her cheating will be OK. FOOL!...

Cheaters all around and a slut for a wife.

no, you have an idiot wife who has opened the door to destroy your marriage and you were stupid enough to walk through it.

Wife has ulterior motive.

Whore has ulterior motives.