All Comments on 'The Master Gene Ch. 09'

Yo... do you want ppl getting off on it here or going out and doing it to ppl... also don't try to ruin a story by calling it rape... and lastly ur on the last chapter which means u read the other 8... which means u get of on so called "rape porn" too jackass

Whackdoodle; if this sight bothers you so much why our you here and reading stories that would upset you delete your account and go where the reading won't upset you.

Just ignore Whackdoodle. He's clearly a troll and not only that, he's one who clearly hasn't even read this story since if he had, he'd notice that Derrick has yet to purposely enslave ANYONE. His only time using his power was when it was force activated by the Amanda and Sarah. Before that he didn't even know he HAD powers and he has deliberately not used them since.

I haven’t read the chapter after this but if it hasn’t happened already please don’t let the grandfather get wants he wants don’t make him get more slaves

This is the first chapter I've read so far and gave it a five. And commented. The number of grammatical errors in earlier chapters were just too commonplace. Yet the subject matter is great! Now Derrick is getting a bit more mature lets see what other challenges come his way.

Kinda iffy, that isolation with which the essentially secret society guys who try to weaponize the chemicals conduct themselves. Their plot(s) could be hit or miss.

Such a prominent word as "maturbation" might deserve a correction from "masterbation" in a porn story.

I like how the mind control kicks in here, kinda ruthlessly yet from the base up. In many stories it's just.. 'poof'.. now they're a distilled slut and since physical and mental disposition comes from nowhere and it remains unaddressed, the following actions are worthless.

Get your names straight. I lost count of how many times you've fucked that up.