All Comments on 'The Master Gene Ch. 12'

Missed these! Ty this was good

For fucks sake. Instead of getting better, this is getting worse.

For months it’s a non stop fuck-a-thon. That gets old fast. It’s like you have no idea what being a guy is like: no time for friends, for R&R, no holidays, no days off, no video games, no movies. Nothing but sex, sex, sex and always, always ALWAYS being pawed at. Being talked to. Being the center.

Like seriously, why actually wants that shit 24/7….and then you bring children into this shitstorm? You’ve got women who would literally commit suicide if he dies and you think a mother wouldn’t kill her children and herself? You think these mentally unstable women can be mothers when their Master is their primary focus?

Come on, man. Use your head here. At this point he should be tired of them always being underfoot. Always needing him, always touching him always talking to him and he can’t even play a video game without them needing him. And then children. How will mothers who live and breathe at their masters command going to be good mothers? How is he going to be a good father when he can’t even be a boyfriend?

How badly do you think his kids will be fucked up? Because I’m looking at these shit for brains women who can’t even go a night without needing to be with him and then you throw screaming babies into this?

Fuck that.

The wait was worth it. Keep up the good work.

Building up chapter, eh?

Hopefully we get to continue the grandfather, father, mother storyline soon.

Ignore Whackdoodle- he/she get's off trolling stories- I don't think he/she has ever written a positive or constructive comment ever.

Thanks for returning to this; I look forward to seeing where your muse takes us.

I've been enjoying the story a lot.

Ignore Whackdoodle. He comments a lot on the loving wives category, where he fawns over cucks and hates any story with a normal guy in it. If he really hates your story, then you know you're doing everything right.

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Any good harem story ends up with all the women knocked up by their master. Only an emasculated soyboi would think otherwise.

I'm enjoying this series. Glad you're back!

Love this story hope to see more soon!!!

I third the mention regarding Whackdoodle. I've rarely read anything written by this person that supports a story where men are in power and women are the subservient/slave ones.

This story is actually quite well written and getting better with this chapter. I feel it advances the story quite nicely.

So, Karen wants in Derrick's harem? Not a big incest fan, but the approach is interesting.