All Comments on 'The Master Gene Ch. 16'

Well, I guess the winner takes it all, now. Though the girls can probably 'subtly' influence the result by killing the one they do not like.

I guess Amber overcame the power enough to directly defy her master. Lesson here is you can only be so much of an asshole. Let the battle royal begin!

Okay I didn’t see it happening like this. I figured that Ben and Derrick were going to battle it out over Derrick’s girls. But the way this ended seems to imply that Amber had a shred of free will remaining and that allowed her to throw the chemical mix onto them. Maybe the betrayal by her master gave her a mental choice or weakened the hold Ben had on her. Can’t wait to see what happens next

Could Amber really have thrown the chemical? Having been bound to Ben, she couldn't do anything to harm him & she'd just heard that a competition for mastery of slaves could prove fatal to her master.

Okay, slight nitpick, but you keep accidentally calling Ben "Derrick"...

This oughta be fun. Unless this ends the series.

I think once enslaved always enslaved except when you “challenge/death battle” for the others slaves it happens like it normally would when enslaving someone and or how it did with Karen in the hospital and who ever has the greater will power and mental fortitude wins but the can be influenced by things like their state of mind, emotions and even the people that they enslaved and then the winner gets to keep the losers slave

I think once enslaved always enslaved except if through “challenge/death battle” it can not be done on purpose but by change and proxy like this how the both “activated” in the same vicinity and happens like a normal enslavement/ how it happened to Karen in the hospital and the winner is based of things like willpower and mental fortitude but can be influenced by things like state of mind, emotions and the people they enslaved and the winners takes the losers slave permanently

Excellent twist at the end....please release the next chapter at the earliest