All Comments on 'The Master of Truth 002'

This is some nice reading

hi there

as enjoyable as the rest. nice writign style.

As to how to fix the fact that Juliana has a fiance who is a cop, that is a simple thing for Logan to deal with. All Logan has to announce is that both Kristi and Juliana are not missed by anyone and that Juliana is not engaged or otherwise attached to anyone. As "The Master of Truth" he can have any woman he wants, he can live anywhere he wants and take or buy anything he wants, all he has to do is say something and it is so.

The only real threat to Logan is if he overlooks a situation and someone gets the drop on him before he can think and then say something to bring the situation to a safe and beneficial solution for Logan.

Of course another potential threat is someone who has the same powers as him and knows how to use them.

Otherwise it is really up to Logan, how challenging he makes his life as just speaking things so could become boring, once you have had any woman you have ever wanted and done every thing you have ever wanted to do.

Logan doesn't need a college degree, he doesn't need to work out or get a job, all he has to do is say the words and he has the knowledge, is a stud who can fuck all night long and all day long, doesn't need sleep to heal or recover, doesn't get tired, is a multi-billionaire who doesn't need to pay any taxes.

Hell he can declare the world is peaceful, there is no robberies, burglaries, fights, etc...He can declare that the Earth is a tropical paradise and nobody get skin cancer or sunburns, but has a nice tan going. He can declare that every woman he comes across will workout and maintain their perfect body and ever man he comes across will want to be his friend and buy or give him what he needs.

I really liked this one and I can't wait for more!

I am sure that Juliana's fiancee can easily e convinced that he loves to see her get fucked by Logan. In fact, I am sure he will eagerly procure more bimbos for Logan.

What makes this story great is your ability to write. What will cement this as a truly great mind control story is if you develope a few non sexual situations that require his abilities. Cop boyfriend is a start but too easily solved. His powers seam to be limitless, so a true test of his powers will require either an equally apposing force or someone immune to his powers. Can't wait to see what come up with.

:)

You don't have to (and shouldn't, in my opinion) make such a point of the fact that Kristi is asian. It becomes a distraction when it is so frequent. It's all hot and I'm not saying that the scene's are bad. It's just something that I've noticed in a few stories on this site.

Fantastic! You write Kristi really well :)

Became of his ex-gf . He sent her home telling her she could not get off unless he f_cked her. She hasn't been back you would think by now she would be begging for relief. Now about the Cop. that could be a Major problem. if she breaks up with him he will follow and find out who the New Guy is. Not Good.

forward to more. An interesting take on the usual array of mind control methods and I like the focus on the way that the women react to the narrator's reality altering comments. I did see the comment about the repeated referral to Kristi and re-read it, finding while I could be left out of future chapters, it seems consistent with the character of the narrator, who makes no apologies for objectifying women.

Thanks for taking the time to write and post.

This is different from the normal MC that I like. Stuff that's just, "I alter reality with my mind" just feels lazy to me. There's no challenge or dance. You however did an amazing job of capturing "the hunt" I absolutely loved it!

I loved this story

Very nicely done. Hope to read more.

Very yummy indeed... Thank you!

Nice

Fun

Thanks

Love your stories!

I love your work

Okay, this is super frustrating. I want to like this story, but the author isn’t being consistent with the premise.

In a society that doesn’t lie, there’s no concept of cheating on a test. The language wouldn’t even have a word for it.

ZK

Yeah that's the problem with the concept of no lying; cheating doesn't exist, which makes it very difficult for storylines like this to stay true to that premise. Interestingly this would have a knock-on effect on many other things, but I'm guessing things like this will happen since it's otherwise too restrictive.

I wonder where this story is going. Is he just going to gather more fucktoys? Is there a bigger plot?