All Comments on 'The Mastermind'

Woop woop. Big thanks to Kenji Sato for the editing work and amazing knowledge on literacy. Learning more all the time and without his help, I wouldn’t be getting published and probably would have shelved my writing aspirations

Yawn? He just watches some stupid machine have all the fun? Dude, you seriously need to get laid.

Clearly not so boring considering you read 3k words until you got to ‘the plot’ lol. I consider your comments spam by this point.

The story isn’t about ‘the guy’ in this story either. It’s about the girls. And readers who enjoy what’s happening to the girls. They clearly do since many have pinned this story to their favourites.

Nice start for what might be a good series. Curious about the follow up!

@RK thank you kindly

Don’t try to defend yourself against the negative comments - never worth the effort. Fun little tale with a little coercion and good eroticism. I think you could have developed your role a little, playing with her nipples for example, and the ending was a little rushed for perfection, but overall an enjoyable read. Thanks

Thanks :-) haha I’ve noticed similar comments everywhere they’re like an overplayed buzz word from 10 years ago that have become so common they’ve lost all credibility and meaning

Glad you enjoyed and well described a fun little tale lol thanks heaps for the feedback stay posted for more

Can't wait for the follow up!!

Looking forward to the next installment of this!

Thanks legends, I’ll start writing the follow up after the holidays period